by Aiden, Age 14
, Grade 8, Model Laboratory School, Richmond, KENTUCKY USA
Teacher: Travis Marcum
Nick: Crew member
Evan: Random Native American with no name
Harrison: Spanish King
H: ¨Can I have a cheese sandwich please?¨
A: ¨If you let me go to India and get you some spices, it will make your sandwich better.¨
H: ¨Okay, but only if you bring me some spices, and hot sauce too.¨
A: ¨Alright then, you are very wealthy, why don't you let me have some money for the journey.¨
H: How much will you need?¨
A: ¨All of it.¨
H: ¨I’m sorry, but I can't do that.¨
A: ¨Aw dang.¨
A: Are you tired of your cheese sandwiches being too boring and dull?!
A: Too bad!
H: And now back to our Disney Channel movie: Christopher the murderer!
Aiden stabs Harrison and takes the money
H: *Gasp What are you doing?
A: Taking your money! And you aren't getting a cheese sandwich either!
H *grasping for air Aw dang!
Aiden steals the king’s crown and exits the building and leaves on his stolen ship
ON THE BOAT
N: Hey Christopher, when will we hit land?
A: I don’t know, sometime soo-
A: Well, it looks like we hit shore.
A: Alright, just be quiet.
N: *Grumble *Grumble.
ON THE SHORE
E: Hello there my friends, what can I do for you today?
A: What!? There are already people here? God must have blessed us, don’t you think George?
N: Yes, I believe God has blessed us.
E: Anyway, what can I do for you?
A: What kind of food do you all have here?
E: Food? Well we have corn, wheat, cows, bison, and even chicken.
A: thought bubble( after i get food and a house i can make them slaves)
E: Come over here, to my village. There is food and shelter.
A: Ok I will.
N: Yeah, let's go.
The Native American shows them to their longhouse and give them plenty of food.
A: thought bubble ( I will get the Native American into my hut and trap him.)
E: good morning
A: good morning, can you come to my longhouse for a second I need to ask you something.
When evan got in the house aiden blocked the entrance.
E:what are you doing
A:I'm locking you in here and keeping you as a slave. I will make good profit off these. If you try to get away I will kill you.
Aiden then put handcuffs on Evan
A: I will get the ship ready. When I get back I will be so famous and rich. Hahaha