by Nowa B., Age 12 , Grade 7, South East Junior High, Iowa City, IOWA USA
Teacher: Mr.Keller-Wilson

  1. Write the beginning of your memoir below: Start with your lead. Then, describe where you are and who you are with. After that, describe how the problem started.

And the blood was rushing down my head, dripping, I was crying 3 to 4 minutes.

My life flashed before my eyes and was I going to die? My cousins helped me and I was taken to the healing center. My was heart racing faster than Goku. faster than the speed of light.

  1. Middle: Main event, describe it using lots of sensory details

I was running and I busted my head on the hard cement. I cried a whole bunch and blood was streaming down my head and I thought that I would die.

  1. End: So what? Explain what you learned and/or how you changed.

I went home and my parents were worried about me and I had to wear this bandage around my head and we made jokes about it.

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