by Nowa B., Age 12 , Grade 7, South East Junior High, Iowa City, IOWA USA
Write the beginning of your memoir below: Start with your lead. Then, describe where you are and who you are with. After that, describe how the problem started.
And the blood was rushing down my head, dripping, I was crying 3 to 4 minutes.
My life flashed before my eyes and was I going to die? My cousins helped me and I was taken to the healing center. My was heart racing faster than Goku. faster than the speed of light.
Middle: Main event, describe it using lots of sensory details
I was running and I busted my head on the hard cement. I cried a whole bunch and blood was streaming down my head and I thought that I would die.
End: So what? Explain what you learned and/or how you changed.